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aniakovas

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SNOW
« on: July 01, 2013, 11:45:42 AM »
SNOW, Corrected for a massive continuity error, and spelling and words missed etc.

Feedback welcome, also anything I've missed...

This is the first two years of snow...

http://aniakovas-snow.blogspot.co.uk/

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Re: SNOW
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2013, 10:32:11 PM »
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...on the "about" page, the sentence appears to have been.. hurried!  ::) :)